The Bridesmaid

ok all u poor souls who are reading this... here's my attempt at writing a song.... well, i just wrote the lyrics, but it's structured in the style of a song i guess... anyone wanna write a tune for it? ok so here goes....

The Bridesmaid

The Bridesmaid
She looked real pretty in that dress
Of onion soup and cream caress
The pearls that shine in the orient
The love of swines in rooms for rent.

Yeah this girl
She wanted one of you.
Oh yeah this girl,
She wanted,
She waited,
She died.

The dark man,
Who walks in shadows of street lights
Of bright blue sounds and kangaroo fights.
His eyes spell hope of abandonment,
The breath of plastic fifty cents.

Yeah this man
He wanted one of you.
Oh yeah this man,
He wanted,
He waited,
He died.

The queer boy.
He loved cookies, cakes and clefts
A million kisses, right of left?
Kissing boys in gthe days gone by
When Peter Pan, he still could fly.

Yeah this boy,
He wanted one of you.
Oh yeah this boy,
He wanted,
He waited,
He died.

Oh yeah,
They all wanted one of you.
Oh yeah,
They all wanted you.
A part of you.
A part of you.

Love your neighbour as yourself.
Drink Coke in cans that can eat with chopsticks.
Don't ask what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country.
Turtles' eggs are found in sand.
Piano keys are white and black.
You will reap what you sow.
The camel's hump don't like Jazz.
The tortoise wins the hare if the hare sleeps.
Flowers swirl and time tastes like coffee.
So who is faster?
The one who wishes on the star.

Yeah this girl,
She wanted one of you.
Oh yeah this girl
She wanted,
She waited,
She died.

And the bridesmaid smiles.

ok ladies and gentlemen, that is my song. pls tell me what you think of it... all u have to do is click on the button below that says "comment". thank you very much. have a lovely life.